True and humorous. Poetry should be less about rules, and more about heart and emotion. MD:77.

Lmoa! (yes, lmoa--or have i explained that to you already? *shrug*) Well done here, vixen. Powerfully expresses your point.

wolfie

*applauds* You rock. Just... Agh. You do. I know people like that. I try to point it out, and they're all "creative license" and it bugs me. >.< Yup. That's it. Had to struggle through some of the words, though. I'm too tired to decipher it... ^^

This made me laugh. xD I love it.

Poetry is a matter of taste. I still liked the last line. It, is, good, advice!;.

~SirScott

My friends and I talk about the freakish poetic licenses people take with grammar all the time! Okay, okay, so I admit I may drop a few periods or commas, but still. This is great. Keep writing,
kanii

Hey now, is that a rip on me? Naw, I know it wasn't. I occasionally don't use punctuation, but that's just if I feel the poem doesn't need it. Most of the time, I'm pretty good about using it. I know the rules - I can break them. ;) This is pretty funny, though. The parody element shines through. :D Keep writing! :)