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| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-09-22 ch 1,  | abuseWhat a haunting piece. My favorite lines are, of course, "every letter formed perfectly in my long straight style/words standing taller than my shoulders ever have." That's just so great. Great work. Keep writing! :) |
| printed-peppermint 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseNo word in this poem is out of place. I really love this: turn my hands palm up to whisper secrets against my pulse You write beautifully. So keep doing it. -kanii |