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| Thenardier 2007-11-10 ch 1,  | abuseOnce again, another lovely haiku. This one rings true, yet as usual, it unsettles me. Perhaps with its blunt honesty? Good job. |
| unshattered 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI really like the images and thoughts this brought across. Nice work =) |
| Basara 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abusehm... true... nice... |
| x.Insanely Serene.x 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abusei like it, it's deep && it erally gets to me!! && it makes a lot of sense, we'll always be burning cuz there's always a door we need to open... ohh && when u say mechanical... it reminded me of a robot>_< i'm a loser haha |
| Definition 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseNow, I've been away for a bit, and I've just came back and read a ton of your new stuff...just wanted to say,: I remember when I first started reading your writing. It was good back then, you know. Decent. Now, it's beyond good. Your writing style is still somewhat similar and much like your own, but it's changed in a positive way. Not only are your compositions beautiful/powerful, they also provoke much thought and inspiration. And I really appreciate that :) You, as one of my faved authors, will never cease to amaze me. Keep it up! - Now, for the haiku. Ah. I really adore this. The idea is quite extraordinary. Somehow...no matter how high tech we are, how far we succeed, we're still humans, not gods. And there's always a future to look upon, an infinite future to stumble upon new discoveries. There's always room for improvement, no matter how good you are. Or maybe its something along the lines of "There are no shortcuts in life?" My 2 cents. Either way, excellent haiku. |