Reviews for An Unwanted Farewell

simpleplan13 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abusevery bittersweet and well written... the rhyming was great as well... I really loved the last line
Litheral 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseYour title is excellant for this piece. Very moving, and I like the characters determination in leaving. Head strong in what she is doing but still sad at what she must do for herself. The only thing I would say to critique this piece is I wish you could have put more imagery into this. All in all, you did very well. Bravo! & Keep Writing!
Needa S 2007-09-19 ch 1,	abuseRejection is the worst thing to deal with. You done an excellent job expressing it here. Write on and thanks for the nice replies and reviews. God Bless you.
Alexandria Smith 2007-09-17 ch 1,	abuseOh wow, this is good... and I think I know who you're talking about... thats really sad... gosh. Well, I think alot of people can relate to this kind of thing so job well done... this is an excellent piece, keep it up! ~aLi