i know how you feel. i write a lot of emo poetry too, and people always are skipping to conclusions!

anyway, this is a really good poem. i love how youve written it so the message isnt totally obvious, but it is understandable. (yeah, that probably doesnt make sense, but hey, who cares?)

srz

Umm, that seemed like a lot of intense emotion, but it didn't seem like you said exactly what you wanted to say (you referes to the narrator)