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| Ardelia Lortz 2008-06-07 ch 1,  | abuseYikes, that was gruesome. I'd have placed the story in the 'M' category rather than 'T' because I think it's a bit too gory for the younger audience. It was a very weird and unusual story and I liked it. As another reviewer stated though, I was a bit confused at the end. I'm not quite sure what happened there. |
| Crysta Mayville 2008-06-06 ch 2, | abuseI'm kinda confused about the end... did she kill her on the street or in a hospital... I'll probably get this an hour later, I'm really slow... |
| emotionless-stares 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuselol kinda creepy but awesome. |