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| FellowMan 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseFantastic, really vivid/fun wording ! |
| Jessie 2007-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is so very spectacular. I have been away from your work for a while and upon returning I stumble upon this. You have such a beauty to you. You never cease to inspire and amaze me. What would you think about coming to Olympia some time this year and reading your work either to a small group of writers or in public (or both)?? I would love to have you if you are willing? |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseThere was a plethora of great analogiers in this one. I always love the imagery you use in your poetry. its always so twisted and unique and well breathtaking. the Stranger in the moonlight |
| SirScott 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseThat poem really sums up the desire of wanting what you can't have. ~SirScott |
| diffident 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseAgh the last line is amazingly succinct & appropriate & so perfect for this! This is such a great poem; there are so many intricacies in this and it's amazing. Basically. :] marie |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem, as always. (Don't I always start my reviews this way?) I loved the ending - it summed the whole piece up so beautifully. Kudos. Rowan. |