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Reviews For: Without Tongues

FellowMan
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseFantastic, really vivid/fun wording !
Jessie
2007-09-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is so very spectacular. I have been away from your work for a while and upon returning I stumble upon this. You have such a beauty to you. You never cease to inspire and amaze me. What would you think about coming to Olympia some time this year and reading your work either to a small group of writers or in public (or both)?? I would love to have you if you are willing?
the Stranger in the moonlig...
2007-09-17
ch 1,
abuseThere was a plethora of great analogiers in this one. I always love the imagery you use in your poetry. its always so twisted and unique and well breathtaking.

the Stranger in the moonlight
SirScott
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseThat poem really sums up the desire of wanting what you can't have.

~SirScott
diffident
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseAgh the last line is amazingly succinct & appropriate & so perfect for this! This is such a great poem; there are so many intricacies in this and it's amazing. Basically. :]

marie
All Alone With Her Thoughts
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful poem, as always. (Don't I always start my reviews this way?) I loved the ending - it summed the whole piece up so beautifully. Kudos.

Rowan.
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