thank you so much for updating!! your tenses were eh sometimes. other than that it was good! yay dim and prim! =D
can't wait for your nxt update!

I was excited to see an update of this! Good chapter, I loved Dim and Prim. You did switch tenses quite a bit, so be careful about that XD Keep it up!
Faith

update update update sooner!

aweonse chapter! update soon!

I read this whole thing last week and thought you would never update anytime soon I'm so happy you did. I love this story, it's so interesting. So RAyne found DAra? I would love to be a fly on the wall during that fight. but how do they know each other? I don't rememberif u said why or not. Dim and Prim are very likeable, Dim is funny :). I can't wait fo the next update! :-D

omg you actually updated! WOW! i read it so fast because i just couldnt believe it and ive been waiting for this for so long geez. i might have to reread the chapter because i read it so fast, but so far so good! Awesome chapter, each interraction with rayne catches my attention all the time and i can't help but keep reading. i like the new characters,Prim and Dim. LOL. funny names. and so now im assuming we can trust Dara, right? She's a good guy. i hope. heh. okay, I'm gonna go reread this. update sooner!

When are you going to update this thing? It's pure genious!

wow what a story! i really like the plot. =) but rayne is creepy. very creepy. which makes me wonder is dara really telling the truth ? poor nick. bet rayne had something to do w/ that 'accident'. update soon plz!

You should do the next chapter in Rayne's point of view. Please? XD

I'm really glad to hear that you're doing better, by the way.

Great addition. It's good to see you back online. We all need breaks sometimes. Nice work. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~

Awesome chapter! And FINALLY! You are back! Loved it. Can't wait for more. Seriously. Plus, are you writing anymore stories? I really like your ideas. I read your short story, and I really liked it. Please write more! I'd really really love it! update soon!
~Krisi

omg i love you so much for updating!!
this chapter was amazingly great
i hope nick wasn't that soul sucked :(
happy spring break

As I said before, great chapter! I really loved the interaction with Rayne. Can't wait for the next bit, glad you're back!

Mileana x

I loved it! Update soon!

Oh, happiness! You are back! And with an awesome chapter ;D. So did Rayne go after Dara or Nick? Hmm. We shall see. I'm not so sure if I like Rayne. But maybe that's the point. He's just really... mean, and stuff. But he's tres sexi! So, I guess I can forgive him. Ha.
update update update soon! Please? The wait was so long last time.