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| Da.ChiicK.Fr0m.H3LL 2008-08-11 ch 8,  | abusewow what a story! i really like the plot. =) but rayne is creepy. very creepy. which makes me wonder is dara really telling the truth ? poor nick. bet rayne had something to do w/ that 'accident'. update soon plz! |
| Layla the fiend 2008-03-29 ch 8, | abuseYou should do the next chapter in Rayne's point of view. Please? XD I'm really glad to hear that you're doing better, by the way. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 8, | abuseGreat addition. It's good to see you back online. We all need breaks sometimes. Nice work. Have a lovely day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Kristin 2008-03-21 ch 8, anon. | abuseAwesome chapter! And FINALLY! You are back! Loved it. Can't wait for more. Seriously. Plus, are you writing anymore stories? I really like your ideas. I read your short story, and I really liked it. Please write more! I'd really really love it! update soon! ~Krisi |
| Thirteen Spirals 2008-03-20 ch 8, | abuseomg i love you so much for updating!! this chapter was amazingly great i hope nick wasn't that soul sucked :( happy spring break |
| Mileana 2008-03-20 ch 8, | abuseAs I said before, great chapter! I really loved the interaction with Rayne. Can't wait for the next bit, glad you're back! Mileana x |
| GDgirl1993 2008-03-19 ch 8, | abuseI loved it! Update soon! |
| hightop 2008-03-19 ch 8, anon. | abuseOh, happiness! You are back! And with an awesome chapter ;D. So did Rayne go after Dara or Nick? Hmm. We shall see. I'm not so sure if I like Rayne. But maybe that's the point. He's just really... mean, and stuff. But he's tres sexi! So, I guess I can forgive him. Ha. update update update soon! Please? The wait was so long last time. |
| warmdecember 2008-03-19 ch 8, | abuseGood interraction with Rayne. Oh geez, did he do that to Nick? I kind of liked Nick, too. and yay! you are back! I was so happy seeing the new update, I've been waiting for it for so long. heh. can't wait for the next update! (do it soon) |
| Faith Adeline 2008-03-18 ch 8, | abusegood chapter, I liked it. Keep it up and update soon. Faith |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-03-18 ch 8, | abuseah did rayne thing nick was the one who told her to stay away? o god. |
| Zessei 2008-03-18 ch 8, | abuseWoohoo yay! You're back! Nice update. |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-03-18 ch 8, | abuseOh. I bet Rayne did that to Nick. Possibly. Anyways, update soon! |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-02-18 ch 7, | abusethis story is very interesting so far... hm idkk about Rayne..i think he makes ur put the bracelet on because he doesnt like her when shes all over him.. but when she does have the bracelet on shes herself... and he likes that? idk but u havent updated in a while.. please update soon! |
| Layla the fiend 2008-02-17 ch 7, | abuseI. Fucking. LOVE. Your story. It's just really fuckin' brilliant. Sorry 'bout the foul mouth, I'm just like that. |