What are you trying to do scare me half to death?! Man this tory was so scary that I actualy did jump. My mom was weashing dishes and drooped something, and I was reading your story, and I jumped! I still have the image of that thing in my head! It makes me shiver!

But away from all that this story is really good! I say your a master at Sci-Fi and Horror! You make me so scared, but yet you make me want to continue to read!
-Undrahas