I like this. It produced some really lovely imagery and I particularly liked this last line. I think, however, that the rhyming detracts from the poem, but that's just me. I liked the bolding, italics, and underlining you used. Keep up the good work!

I really liked this - (i love everything involving a musical undertone). Loved the phrase *communicable disease too* (I'm a med student :p).

Liked the way it was written, how u incorporated the imagery as well as just words (with bold and all that)

Keep the awesome writing up!

-TheDJ

I really like this. It describes exactly what I feel when I write. XD Good job!

It's really good, I like it a lot.