Nice ending. Very sweet.

It's sweet, but really irritating with the excessive repitition of the "I asked you" stanza parts. Maybe it'd more amazing (because I really do like it) if you went back and found better ways to introduce each stanza and maybe threw in something about the person you've been asking getting suspiscious and finally figuring out what your true intentions were.

But it's just a thought.

Felicia.

Okay, disguise aside, I have to say reading this poem left me a lasting smile. Such a beautiful and wonderful work. Even though I personally would prefer no girl ever do to me as she does to him with all those intangible questions, I'd have to applaud the beautiful grace by which the whole story was told, and the glamor of the ending. One of the best works I have ever read, good job.

Is it bad if your author's note made me smile as much as the poem?

Anyway, I really loved the whole concept of this, and the repetition. The last line was just plain awesome. Great job! Keep up the good work.