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| miscellanea 2008-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseI like the line that says, "in a baby blue way." You are amazing. |
| Butterfly Masquerade 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI love how you can write so much and still keep the quality that a lot of people seem to lose. I absolutely love almost everything you write, and this one stands out even above the others. |
| RavenclawDragon 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem beyond words. It is perfect in it's portrayal of imperfection. I love irony. I can relate, too, to a love of imperfection. Imperfection can add spice, it's what makes everything unique. ~RM |
| explosion of planes 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuse'I adore mistakes The way they slip off my tongue in that baby blue way Innocent' i love that the most, all i can say is this is amazing i wish i could write poetry like this :) good job |
| painted.music 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abusekonban wa ... ... ... ... Okay, hold it, I'm trying to get my brain to work better than the WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW that I'm getting right now, LoL. That's absolutely all I can think of at the moment, though. This poem left me speechless. What a brilliant, creepy piece! I love the insane tone it held, like the person narrating wasn't completely... well, sane. And I agree wholeheartedly with the "But I like to think of it as flawed ecstasy" And with such speechlessness only comes one thing: *adds to favs* I hope to read many more from you. I'm STILL unable to come up with a suitable response for such a piece. Brilliant! Zaijen -Shan- |
| Wear Me 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abusei'm lost for words, we're all just lost in words right? beautiful (but i dont want to be too repetitive) |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, you did nothing to offend the literature gods with this piece. |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseMy initial reaction to this is 'wow' and then a very full speechlessness. The whole poem is perfect, you're voice has matured so much I can hardly believe it. 'baby blue way' 'licking the blood' the last two verses. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I loved it. Keep up the good work, and post soon, I can't wait to read more. Much love, Juliet. |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThe first line sounds so sweet and twisted, very attention-grabbing. Insanity=flawed ecstasy, that's so creative. You really have ways of putting words together. Great poem! -C.N |
| astral boy 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat attitude to it... great great. |
| Jessie 2007-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh! I literally fell over in bed with this one. Amazing. That last stanza is undefinably monumantal. |
| ohthevoices 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThe first stanza got my attention, and the last left me with something to think about. The middle wasn't too bad either. ;) Nicely done, as usual! |
| Toxic.Industrial.Waste 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThe 1st stanza: "I adore mistakes The way they slip off my tongue in that baby blue way Innocent" It really got my attention. This is how I feel about flaws, as well. Great job. The last line is strong and ends it just right. |
| axis.on.a.tilt 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseYour first two lines are oh so catching, hooking, you have caught me in a snare. On to read some more... |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. Insanity is simply the neighbor of genius. the Stranger in the moonlight |