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miscellanea
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseI like the line that says, "in a baby blue way." You are amazing.
Butterfly Masquerade
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abuseI love how you can write so much and still keep the quality that a lot of people seem to lose. I absolutely love almost everything you write, and this one stands out even above the others.
RavenclawDragon
2007-10-04
ch 1,
abuseI love this poem beyond words. It is perfect in it's portrayal of imperfection. I love irony. I can relate, too, to a love of imperfection. Imperfection can add spice, it's what makes everything unique.

~RM
explosion of planes
2007-10-01
ch 1,
abuse'I adore mistakes
The way they slip off my tongue in that baby blue way
Innocent'

i love that the most, all i can say is this is amazing i wish i could write poetry like this :) good job
painted.music
2007-09-29
ch 1,
abusekonban wa

... ... ... ...

Okay, hold it, I'm trying to get my brain to work better than the WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW that I'm getting right now, LoL. That's absolutely all I can think of at the moment, though. This poem left me speechless. What a brilliant, creepy piece! I love the insane tone it held, like the person narrating wasn't completely... well, sane. And I agree wholeheartedly with the "But I like to think of it as flawed ecstasy"

And with such speechlessness only comes one thing: *adds to favs* I hope to read many more from you. I'm STILL unable to come up with a suitable response for such a piece. Brilliant!

Zaijen
-Shan-
Wear Me
2007-09-29
ch 1,
abusei'm lost for words,
we're all just lost in words right?
beautiful (but i dont want to be too repetitive)
Stella Grimshaw.
2007-09-29
ch 1,
abuseWow, you did nothing to offend the literature gods with this piece.
Faithless Juliet
2007-09-25
ch 1,
abuseMy initial reaction to this is 'wow' and then a very full speechlessness. The whole poem is perfect, you're voice has matured so much I can hardly believe it. 'baby blue way' 'licking the blood' the last two verses. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I loved it. Keep up the good work, and post soon, I can't wait to read more.

Much love,
Juliet.
Chidori Nadare
2007-09-24
ch 1,
abuseThe first line sounds so sweet and twisted, very attention-grabbing. Insanity=flawed ecstasy, that's so creative. You really have ways of putting words together. Great poem!

-C.N
astral boy
2007-09-23
ch 1,
abuseGreat attitude to it... great great.
Jessie
2007-09-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseAh! I literally fell over in bed with this one. Amazing. That last stanza is undefinably monumantal.
ohthevoices
2007-09-18
ch 1,
abuseThe first stanza got my attention, and the last left me with something to think about. The middle wasn't too bad either. ;) Nicely done, as usual!
Toxic.Industrial.Waste
2007-09-18
ch 1,
abuseThe 1st stanza:
"I adore mistakes
The way they slip off my tongue in that baby blue way
Innocent"

It really got my attention. This is how I feel about flaws, as well. Great job. The last line is strong and ends it just right.
axis.on.a.tilt
2007-09-17
ch 1,
abuseYour first two lines are
oh so
catching, hooking,
you have caught me in a snare.
On to read some more...
the Stranger in the moonlig...
2007-09-17
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant. Insanity is simply the neighbor of genius.

the Stranger in the moonlight
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