Second to last stanza was, by far, my favorite. This was a good piece.

I like the line that says, "in a baby blue way." You are amazing.

I love how you can write so much and still keep the quality that a lot of people seem to lose. I absolutely love almost everything you write, and this one stands out even above the others.

I love this poem beyond words. It is perfect in it's portrayal of imperfection. I love irony. I can relate, too, to a love of imperfection. Imperfection can add spice, it's what makes everything unique.

RM

'I adore mistakes

The way they slip off my tongue in that baby blue way

Innocent'

i love that the most, all i can say is this is amazing i wish i could write poetry like this :) good job

konban wa

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Okay, hold it, I'm trying to get my brain to work better than the WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW that I'm getting right now, LoL. That's absolutely all I can think of at the moment, though. This poem left me speechless. What a brilliant, creepy piece! I love the insane tone it held, like the person narrating wasn't completely... well, sane. And I agree wholeheartedly with the "But I like to think of it as flawed ecstasy"

And with such speechlessness only comes one thing: *adds to favs* I hope to read many more from you. I'm STILL unable to come up with a suitable response for such a piece. Brilliant!

Zaijen

-Shan-

i'm lost for words,

we're all just lost in words right?

beautiful (but i dont want to be too repetitive)

Wow, you did nothing to offend the literature gods with this piece.

My initial reaction to this is 'wow' and then a very full speechlessness. The whole poem is perfect, you're voice has matured so much I can hardly believe it. 'baby blue way' 'licking the blood' the last two verses. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I loved it. Keep up the good work, and post soon, I can't wait to read more.

Much love,

Juliet.

The first line sounds so sweet and twisted, very attention-grabbing. Insanityflawed ecstasy, that's so creative. You really have ways of putting words together. Great poem!

-C.N

Great attitude to it... great great.

Ah! I literally fell over in bed with this one. Amazing. That last stanza is undefinably monumantal.

The first stanza got my attention, and the last left me with something to think about. The middle wasn't too bad either. ;) Nicely done, as usual!

The 1st stanza:

"I adore mistakes

The way they slip off my tongue in that baby blue way

Innocent"

It really got my attention. This is how I feel about flaws, as well. Great job. The last line is strong and ends it just right.

Your first two lines are

oh so

catching, hooking,

you have caught me in a snare.

On to read some more...