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| CarlyJo 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseSeems a lot like Forbidden Fruit now, but if you continue on with it, that will probably change. Interesting. |
| j 2007-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abusehmm i thought u would make it worse than u wrote. i was kind of dissappointed lol. i would have thought u would cut her in half or make her head roll off or something. it was good though. just my expectations were higher lol. |