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Reviews For: Time Continues On

CarlyJo
2007-09-17
ch 1,
abuseSeems a lot like Forbidden Fruit now, but if you continue on with it, that will probably change. Interesting.
j
2007-09-16
ch 1, anon.
abusehmm i thought u would make it worse than u wrote. i was kind of dissappointed lol. i would have thought u would cut her in half or make her head roll off or something. it was good though. just my expectations were higher lol.
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