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| romance at short notice. 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseAbsolutely adore it. Note the lack of an "ed" ending, because I will read this over and over and over again. |
| Agapantha 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseYay! you're right- it's not like what I thought, I was looking forward to this! Brilliant! Panths. Ps, sorry I havn't answered your PM, SCHOOL IS MAKING LIFE HECTIC! I actually havn't had time to write this review but hey, what do you know? Lovely stuff, hun. |
| Narc 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseYou know, I think this is the sort of thing most readers are either going to love or hate. I can't say I enjoy the style, but I have to admit that you've done an amazing job setting up a scene that's almost entirely dialogue. I guess this is one of those situations where I have to admit that I don't like it, but at the same time say it's a job well done. I hope that makes sense. I can't really critique the writing. It's pretty good. I actually really wish you were writing this in a more traditional style, because I would love to read the rest, then. |
| concerto49 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseConcerto RR. Is this a script - or perhaps a cross between a story and a play? This is certainly new-ish. Now, I'm not sure if I should say this needs more description about everything, as there barely is some, but then the style may make me say otherwise. Don't know if the title exactly fits, but yeah I fairies are cool if you ask me, so this was pretty interesting. It does sound a bit fable-like and all. Hm, it's mainly dialogue and you had to use breaks too, I wonder. Does sound young too. Anyhow. Cheers. |
| sincerely disregard 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseIn all honesty, it slightly confusing with all the parentheses, but I think that is sort of what you were going for. I like the feel of it and it has a nice sense of originality. |