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| arianin 2007-09-18 ch 1,  | abuseNicely written for what I read, but I think you need to put more of a warning than (WARNING FOR CONTENT!) I wouldn't have started reading this if I had known the content was child rape!(WARNING FOR CONTENT!) is very ambiguous, you need to be more specific and let people know what they are going to read. |
| Echoes89 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was ...wow. i loved the irony in it and the foreshadowing. i'd love to see a another chapter |