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| WriterXO 2008-02-03 ch 1,  | abuseI thought this poem was pretty interesting to read. I like the way you wrote it. It seems like you really put thought into this. Pretty clever. Sorry if this is something that has happened to you. |
| never-written 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked the stress you put on the words...it made me stop and try to figure out why that was there...how it changed the meaning. Then i read the other reviews and realized that those wrods are actually a "hidden message", so to speak. Amazing. |
| ilovebooksandmusic 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. I always promise myself that I won't do something, that I will just make it stop and I won't dwell on it. And each time, I break that promise. "Promised myself that promises were fake." I loved it. Just the whole thing, it has so much emotion, it's powerful. Ah, I just loved it! |
| Daiysis 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abusei love reading the entire poem and then readin the hidden message in your poetry by just reading what's italized, it's so awesome! You're even willing to go the extra and curse at the end to prove just how frustrated the person is with themself. amazing... |
| a silenced revolution 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseOw. I'm sorry... Realy intense. I like your use of italics. |
| Moondog Dozier 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseVery relatable with the specific emotion. The reader can feel the words, even before they are read and comprehended, which is a difficult thing to accomplish. Good work. |
| Ashelin 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was a pretty extreme ending. "Promised yself that promises were fake". Good job, I realy could see the emotion in this. ps (i always love your little hidden words. they are like imaginary secrets, if that makes sense. which im sure it doesnt) |