Reviews for Biography of Myself

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WishIWasAnEagle 2008-04-21 ch 26,	abuseEilish, i think i'm quite good at seeing past your mask and this doesn't seem to be you your talking about, maybe partly and maybe it used to be but, girl, you are not quiet. and anyway, i embarrass myself on a daily basis, the trick is to not go red and look embarrassed but to laugh along with them and pretend that you made a joke at your own expense i will not let you go lonerish in the library on mondays yes but the rest of the week you going to be sitting either where i am or where kelly is. there are still stereo types in nz but not as major as you make out, yes you are a bit geeky and read a bit to much but so do i and i'm pretty sure i'm not classed in the nerd group. the thing is, you've got to be more confident, be the eilish around everyone that you are around your friends (just a bit less insane) people like you because your insane and you make us laugh but your smart at the same time. i just love my little pep talks dont you? ohoh! if you've gotten over your self misery or if you want a laugh please read my new poem, My Thoughts On Thinking its really funny so eilish the point is be confident in who you are if people see that you're confident then they will accept you but the moment you start not believing in yourself then people see you weaknesses and feed on them, its human nature be happy! be confident!
Kelly 2008-04-04 ch 24, anon.	abuseUm... I'm finished, confused, sad and feel like crying. Are you for real? Look I may sound like a freak but your dads a drug addict?
Kelly 2008-04-04 ch 23, anon.	abuseRemind me to check your arms on Monday. I am banishing your rubbers.
Kelly 2008-04-04 ch 16, anon.	abuseI have something to say at EVERY chapter. On chapter 16, Trust me I am one of the people that cares and looks behind the huge smile ok? Yes I may come across 'blonde' a few times but I DO CARE! I think you should put me in one of your stories, i'll but you in mine if i ever get the supid activation message thing(still havn't!). Why is Gina, Jessica and Diviya on there and not me, do tell please... I think you should tell me your secret cause I won't be all "are you ok?" Like you say you don't want. This is an awesome way to express yourself. Tell me your secret and I won't preasure you into telling a n y o n e! I am real good at ranting. I have a few poems in my mind. I destroyed a candle tonight, I watched it burn, a good Fire poem came to mind. You say that a 'big hug' won't help but i'm not a huggy person anyways. What did Gina do to get a medal? Sorry this is so long but i'm going now... bye!
Kelly 2008-04-04 ch 16, anon.	abuseHey me AGAIN. I was reading one of the chapters and when your talking about the Dad part, is it meant to say, "The Eilish drug"? Anyways I...Woops I forgot...nevermind.=-o
Kelly 2008-04-03 ch 12, anon.	abuseHey. Up to chap 12 Stereotypes. This is so true, all this about people and groups its so totally true! I reckon its really cool how you put so much of yourself into Arya(sorry if the spellings wrong!). Hey remember I am actually your friend, even if your cat is your bestest friend I am still your friend okay? I really like this chapter its so true and awesome and...LOTS more! Love your writing. Kelly (Your FRIEND)
Kelly 2008-04-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey Eilish it's Kelly! Your story is awesome so far, i'm up to chapter 8. Your an amazing writer! Remember when something happens BREATH! In, out, in, out! Love it! Kelly
LightManifest 2008-03-21 ch 24,	abuseWow, I think alot of people know your story now, since you have (At the time of this review.) 51 reviews. Hopefully, writing this biography relieves some of that stress. Hey, we know about you now, and look how many people care. I understand things can get really hard, and I feel so bad you live a life like that. I just want you to know that there are good people out there. I used to be really sad about things too once everything started going wrong, and I felt all alone by myself. I singly alone made my life better, realizing that I had a life to live. I want to become great and help others that have had hard times too, now that I know how they feel. You should know, understanding such pain yourself. I accepted all that was wrong, and did what I could with MY life. I tried fixing everything and set a path. I hope you know that your father's life is not your life. I understand that people still do care about their parents, even when they seem to forget about them, because they still have those memories of them being great. I won't say that I want you to still care about your father, but instead I'll say I hope that in all the hate, lies, problems, you'll find your happiness. It's always there, waiting for you to run across it. What happens when you're an adult and by yourself? I hope you give yourself a headstart when you're young, and will live a long and happy life. Especially a girl so smart. Since you're so intelligent then, why not become a scientist, or someone like that? Maybe a veterinarian, so you could work with horses? Or one of those people that rides horses? You can be anything you want if you work hard enough, no matter what situation you're in. I found that out myself, and proud of it!^_^ I'm going to work hard towards my dreams. Do you have dreams? People like you deserve a happy life afterwards, and I'm sure its waiting. We need strong people like you in the world, and I'm sure many people will be happy to have you with them. :) P.S. (Another note on this very long review.) I see you know how it is to put on an act to seem happy to others. Remember that alot of people do this. If you see a person sitting all alone by themselves, smiling perhaps but without friends, I'm sure you'd approach them and be a friend, right? I hate to see good people sitting all alone, people like you, and yet not have friends. I always make friends with people who have a hard time, sitting all alone sometimes too, because a good friend is what they need. I'm happy you have good friends. Oh, and another thing. You didn't get a prize at your 7th year? I hate it when that happens! You work all year long and hard, and then don't get an award! Well, when I write it like that, it almost sounds humorous. Hopefully its something to laugh about in the future. Oh, one more note. I promise this is the last one! There is more than one type of innocence. We know what childhood innocence is. Hope. There is another type of innocence that doesn't mean you haven't grown up. It's the state of accepting the world purely as it is with no drama. Sort of the opposite of what people think normal innocence is, where you're sheltered and closed off. But then again, isn't drama sort of a state of being sheltered? Its a very good type of thing, this type of innocence, and I hope you have it, and if not, I hope you earn it. Innocent people accept the world and can be happy, and very few achieve it. Anyways, I hope this extremely long review was read, which it was. Thanks for having the patience to read it. Sheesh, I thought it was going to be short, and look how it turned out! :)
Anon 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseHow touching, yet lovely written I wish you a happy and greater future, as everyone deserves something good in there life. Oh and Eilish, see you on Monday! From another person starting with E(yeah i'm mad but i don't care!)
WishIWasAnEagle 2008-03-09 ch 23,	abuseyou cut yourself! you know i think the rubbers were better please! when did you start using paper cutters to relieve your stress! i thought you had finally grown out of doing stupid stuff like that! gr!
THE GIPPER 2008-02-26 ch 5, anon.	abuseDear Living in a Nightmare, I forgot to mention that I know how you feel about erasing. I have never done that but I have self harmed other ways. My mom doesn't know, except for the "tantrums" I would throw when pain and anger I bottled up would explode out. I would throw things against the wall, punch my arms, bang my head against the wall, and cut my arms with a pocket knife. I have the urge to cut everyday, simply because I've done it for so long. I still throw things, which i have tried to stop doing. I know how it is to keep everything inside. I cried a lot when I was younger, and even my teachers mocked me for being a crybaby. If only they had known why...My aunt, my mom's older sister is the only one who truly understands me because she has gone through a divorce with a man just like my dad...if not for her i think i would not be in this world. Again, I want to THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing your story down because everything you've written is so true, and coming from a home where normal is actually the twisted, sick, and insane, I totally and completely understand. Love, THE GIPPER God Bless you!
THE GIPPER 2008-02-26 ch 5, anon.	abusedear Living In a Nightmare, Your story/biography is so true. I understand and empathize with you completely. My story is so similar to yours...my dad is a drug addict as well and my mom divorced him when i was 2 1/2 yrs. old. I grew up thinking having no dad in the home was normal, as well as drugs, alcohol, and emotional and physical abuse. My dad used to be special to me until he told me in a voicemail one week before my sixteenth bday that i was dead to him, that i didn't exist. He has bipolar disorder by the way, and is a manic depressive. So I know how you feel cause I loved my dad too.I love your style of writing. You are so honest. You write the words I could never say to those who don't know the truth about my family and would be shocked and ask if its really true. I love this chapter. Actually I love this one and the ones before it. Your words are exactly what i would be writing down if I had to tell my story/bio. No one at my school except for a few people i am privileged to call friends actually know the truth about my family or lack thereof...this past summer I revealed it all to a classmate/acquaintance, and they were shocked. they too thought i came from a "perfect" family, with 2 parents, and no drugs/alcohol at all involved. Was she ever so wrong. Any way, Thank you for sharing your life. You are so brave, and I wish I could do the same. Perhaps people not like us with "normal" families might grow to understand with a person like you standing up and speaking out. People need to hear the truth more than ever and your story brings that and more to a world that's dying from living lies and hiding the fact that there are no "families"anymore, just broken homes, even in 2 parent households. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU...you have no idea how your story has inspired me... Love, THE GIPPER God bless you and keep you safe...Jesus Loves You
Nervous Breakdown 2008-01-24 ch 22,	abuse"Reality is sometimes too painful to acknowledge, but at some point we have to acknowledge it. Because things change, and there’s not point lying to yourself that it will always be the same." Here, here! I completely agree. However, there is this small part which still refuses to accept that and that's the side that wins O_o. Anyways, sorry for not reviewing for a while. Haven't really got much to say other than the fan in my main computer has broken and now i cannot stay on that one long at all and seeing as fictionpress emails goes to the system on THAT computer instead of on this here laptop, i may not be able to talk a lot... But i hope you're okay and yeah. Speak to you asap!
AnneGirl15 2008-01-12 ch 14,	abuseHey Girl! I was just giving a review. I haven't had the chance to read the whole thing yet, but I was curious. Is this your lifes story?? Or is it just a charecter you made up? If this is your story, I am so sorry. I can totally idenify. My dad died when I was like 1. I never got a chance to meet him or anything. I just wanted that father fiquer, you know? Well my mom got remarried when I was 5 to a jerk, if you don't mind me saying. He was, really. My step-brothers were everything to him. My real brother and I were nothing to him. Well now my mom and him are seperated because of a lot of issues. And once again I have no father, not that I really had one anyway. But My story is different than most people. You'd expect me to tell you I'm now a prosititite and a drug addict right?? Well sorry, but no. I am different. I found a father that had wanted me since the day I was born, actually even before that. You want to know his name? It's Jesus! In the Bible it says God is a Father to the Fatherless! He is my father and will always be!! He is the one that won't die on me or won't neglect me! He can be your father too! The Bible says, "For WHOSOEVER call upon the name of the LORD shall be saved." (Romans 10:13) All you have to do is ask him to save you and come into your heart and you can be his child, no strings attached!! Well I hope I encoraged you! Please e-mail if you have any questions or just need someone to talk to!! :) Take care! I'll be praying for you! ~Anne Girl15
WishIWasAnEagle 2007-12-23 ch 21,	abusecool chapter full of Christmas cheer ah tomorrow is Christmas and my bday h'm so happy i hope you are to and don't be annoyed if i don't review because i will be away for the next three weeks and i wont be able to review for about the next four weeks happy holidays

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