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| Narcotic Affliction 2007-09-29 ch 1,  | abuseIt was really...well, just work on making your stories more realistic. It was way too disney-like for anything. And not in the good way. I'm not trying to dis your fic or anything, just giving some crucial points to you. |
| Shini Ikuto 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseaws |
| J.L. Hastings 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseMuahahaha! I have corrupted you! Yes, I know I'm supposed to be reviewing your other story, but it's not up yet, so give me a minute. Beep ya, Jump me! :D |