Reviews for musings from a tenth storey window

Reviews For: musings from a tenth storey window

Hed in the Cloudz 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abuseIt occurs to me that if I succeed in my goal of reviewing all 76 of your stories then I'll be here all night. Oh well, it's worth it. I like how all of the sizes are relevant, and how they compare and all. The whole size doesn't matter thing is really a good point, and quite effective! I like the descriptions, and especially the ending-- but that's a given, isn't it? I don't much like the title, though, as intriguing as it is. He's in a tenth story window-- is that irrelevant, or is this guy embarrassed to be gay (in which case women would have no effect on him)? Is he saying that he prefers the bullet over the woman (that it's a safer choice), or that he prefers the bullet over the drop? --Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!)
xx-cronopio-xx 2008-01-30 ch 1,	abuse"a book ... has the power ... to make you sneeze." I think I will remember that for the rest of my life. :)
simpleplan13 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abusethe ending was great... so funny.. I love it.. the whole piece is great.. how you tell the size and consequence... and I also love how youre so confident in the stanza about you... basically saying its his flaw not yours... that very empowering
Stella Grimshaw. 2007-09-29 ch 1,	abuseI really, really, really, like your work. It's just all nicely tied together.
hey maria 2007-09-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is really really good, holy crap.
Lightning Storm 2007-09-17 ch 1,	abuseAmazing I love this poem. I laughed a little at the end, even tho its kinda sad when you think about it. Excellent job as per usual. Keep it up
luv me like no other 2007-09-17 ch 1,	abuseThis is a wonderful poem. I absolutely love it. ! it's just so unexpected. i thought that it would turn towards something more depressing when you mentioned a bullet and a girl. But then, you have the last line in v and the only line in vi, and i laughed so hard in my chair. I really liked the ending, it's hilarious.
The Pointed Hat 2007-09-17 ch 1,	abuseThis is very clever! Just one thing, though. In the line "permanently main you," the word 'main' oughta be 'maim.' But that's an easy fix. =) Good work.

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