Beautiful yet again. One critique, though. In the third to last line, you used the word "past". I think you meant to use "passed". Also, if possible I think either "passed" or "pass" in the last line need to be changed to something else. The word is a little redundant. Speaking of which...I've yet to find a substitute for "swing" in one of my own poems...

Isn't that the one thing that keeps people alive sometimes. They live for that one person in their lives that they can't live without. I know the feeling...

Blame those who remained silent... I'm sure those who knew blame themselves once it's too late... Another beautiful poem.

Nice. Yes, when one needs it most, everyone is deaf to your cries for help; never okay...

I really like this poem, one of my friends committed suicide last year, and I didn't even know he was depressed. I wish I could have done something, but either way, I really do love this story. I hope that you post the other two poems you have, I really like this one.

Aw... that's so good! So pretty... Big smiley faces are coming your way! =]