Reviews for The Ones that got Lost

Unknown Sorrow 2008-04-15 ch 4,	abuseBeautiful yet again. One critique, though. In the third to last line, you used the word "past". I think you meant to use "passed". Also, if possible I think either "passed" or "pass" in the last line need to be changed to something else. The word is a little redundant. Speaking of which...I've yet to find a substitute for "swing" in one of my own poems...
Unknown Sorrow 2008-04-15 ch 3,	abuseIsn't that the one thing that keeps people alive sometimes. They live for that one person in their lives that they can't live without. I know the feeling...
Unknown Sorrow 2008-04-15 ch 2,	abuseBlame those who remained silent... I'm sure those who knew blame themselves once it's too late... Another beautiful poem.
Unknown Sorrow 2008-04-15 ch 1,	abuseNice. Yes, when one needs it most, everyone is deaf to your cries for help; never okay...
A Distant Planet 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseI really like this poem, one of my friends committed suicide last year, and I didn't even know he was depressed. I wish I could have done something, but either way, I really do love this story. I hope that you post the other two poems you have, I really like this one.
Jesus-Freak2142 2007-10-16 ch 2,	abuseAw... that's so good! So pretty... Big smiley faces are coming your way! =]