Oh Haleth, maybe one day you'll learn to think before you speak. On a side note, I like Lord Serac's habit of calling Haleth 'honey.' It's cute. Your stories are always interesting and a medievalish one sounds fun!

Oh dear... will Haleth ever learn to stop sticking his foot in his mouth? I can't wait for the next chapter.

Subtle. Oh yes, Haleth is just the epitome of that. How is this going to progress? I’m so curious! I just want Serac to be happy!

And so the threesome plot thickens... very interesting.

YAY! I've missed this story, it makes me smile. And what's this? Do I sense a threesome?

Kyaa~ That was so cute~ This entire story has been superb so far. I love it~

Very good romance, and cute fluffiness. Is it going to be a threesome? I vote for Serac to join Haleth and Jay, that would be perfect!

I will be waiting to read more ^^ Great story.

I like Serac more and more each chapter.
I want to hug him now.
lol.
This story is definatly one of my favorites!
I kind of wanted to cry when the chapter ended.
Anyhow, it's awesome, you're awesome, Serac's awesome.
And, update soon. ^^
*huggles*

I have recently found you through someone's favorites. I just want to say i'm so happy i did! I really like your stories, they're so creative and different(in a good way). I've been reading them all and have finally caught up with this one, which i'm starting to get into. I shall religiously watch for updates. Fondly, your newest stalker--I mean fan.

I don't get Hal. One moment he hates Lord Serac's guts and the next he's considering having sex with him? Twisted. Especially since he thought he had raped Jay. I mean, would you want to have sex with the man who raped your lover? The man you think is an arrogant, selfish prick? The man you believed erased Jay's memories?

And Jay. Why is he not mad at Hal? One moment he's admonishing him, the next he's letting him hug him. And he doesn't seem too bothered by the fact that his memories were tampered with.

"That had been part of why it had seemed so ridiculous that Serac was the submissive one out of the two of them. Seeing them now though it was impossible not to notice who was the stronger."

Are you suggesting that because Jay is physically stronger than Serac, he would be the dominant one in their relationship? I don't know, Dom/Sub has more to do with personality and sexual preferences I think. Serac lets Jay top him because he enjoys being dominated during sex...not necessarily because Jay has the strongest built...

Not much happened in the last two chapters, so update soon and bring on the action!
An impatient fan,
Falconer.

Who/What are the elementalists? Are we supposed to know who the Ice Prince is? (Was he in one of the previous stories?) This chapter let me a little bit confused, but you just posted the fifth one so I'm gonna go read it now!
Keep it up,
Falconer.

They changed both their memories so they wouldn't remember the fight or its cause and that's why they stayed together? But how come Jay still had the memory of that night when he killed Zack and the vampires? And did Jay tell Hal (during the first confession) about the circumstances of the crime? You know, about him being a call-boy? Was Hal anger caused only because of the murder of his sire, or because of Jay's past and Zack's involvement with him also?

They're being toyed with by the big guys. Hal is up for some revenge/payback mission, isn't he? Hmm, should be interesting!!

What is it you had said about the story not having a plot? Seems to me like there's one all right. And a good one too. The fluff is just icing on the cake. Demonslayers for the win!

Cheers!
Falconer.

Wow. You weren't kidding when you said it was angsty. Love your fighting scenes. Best ones I've read on FP. I would never have predicted that about Jay's past. And they left on such terrible terms... I wish you hadn't spoiled the rest of the story in the summary. You might want to change it.

You still writing the story, right? I want more, you can't leave it there!
Update soon, pliz!
Cheers,
Falconer.

To me befalls the honor of writing the very first (and long overdue) review for this story! I'll type quickly, don't want anyone sneaking up on me and stealing my right!

As you said, the first chapter is kind of abrupt, and the reader is a bit lost. You know, where does this fall in the greater scheme of things? Hopefully, you'll get to that in the following chapters. Since you said there wasn't going to be any plot, I'll just enjoy the angst and the kisses, which by the way you excel at.
One thing though: If Jatinra loves Haleth, and thought Haleth loved him back, he must have showed his feelings in some way or another. How could Haleth be so oblivious to it, how could he not have suspected?

Of your other stories, I've only read "The Life of a Gay Slayer," but Jay and Hal remind me a lot of Raven and Rick. Was that what you were going for?

Anywayz. Keep it up!
Cheers!
Falconer