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| FlamingFlie 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseI don't normally review poems, so I don't know how good this review will be and how helpful it will be to you, but I liked it. It flowed easily in my mind and had a very picturesque quality. It also had this sad feeling, I loved the lines "the waters not bequeathing a reflection, unfeasible as it is to have light in a world of charcoal without you" It's very life like and it compares to uncommon things very well. I guess I really don't have any bad things to say about it; poetry is so loose and people can't define a certain way that it should be done. ~Flamingflie |