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Aomera 2008-01-14 ch 1,	abuseyeh the lack of capitalization really works - i love the layout of it, it flows perfectly. i love the last stanza most, 'i wonder sometimes/ if you can read/ my fingerprints in the frost', beautiful. Ax
painting andromeda 2007-11-14 ch 1,	abuseThe lack of capitalization makes this poem, as does the message. The tone is not sciolistic, but rather educated and heartfelt. This poem in particular reminds me of the book/movie The Virgin Suicides. Have you seen it? I think that if you have not already, you should, you especially would enjoy what the work stands for. Nice job here. Always brilliant. Forever, Stephen
Aquafied 2007-10-07 ch 1,	abuseno, i hope not.
DOORphrame 2007-10-07 ch 1,	abuse'because mistakes are forever and there’s nothing we can do.' those lines were haunting. i originally wasn't so sure how much i'd like this, but by the end i was in love with it. [i also appreciated your a/n.]
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-09-28 ch 1,	abuseOh, wow, that's powerful. Angsty, too. I love the last two lines of the second stanza, for some reason. They just really speak to me. And I hear you on the lack of capitalization thing - people bust my ass for it, too, and I'm like, ya know, I know how to capitalize and which words should be capitalized, but I have reasons for not doing it. I know the rules, therefore, I can break them. Anyway, nice piece. Keep writing! :)
multiples of six 2007-09-20 ch 1,	abuseThat's.. intense. Wow. Seriously.
2007-09-20 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is fucking gorgeous - amazing - beautiful - i could just go on. and especially after what just broke me (down), i can relate to this more than ever. i can't breathe, it hurts too much. this makes me feel, and that's what i love about it. you are such a talented poet, and everything you write is beautiful. keep writing.
kloun mannequin 2007-09-19 ch 1,	abuseI like the dark feeling in the poem, the first and the third paragraphs are great.

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