   RavenclawMoose 2007-10-04 . chapter 1Very sad; good job at capturing the emotions. I loved the second line. |
 Basara 2007-09-30 . chapter 1when hope dies within expectancy...
nice... |
 Chrissy 2007-09-18 . chapter 1 omigod! i luv it! |
 ilovebooksandmusic 2007-09-18 . chapter 1Very good, and very sad. But I loved it. Good job. |
 Ashelin 2007-09-17 . chapter 1This is quite sad. I hate how I say it like that though. But...it is. Good haiku. |
 a silenced revolution 2007-09-17 . chapter 1Good use of formatting. Nice. |
 Princess-anna57 2007-09-17 . chapter 1:( Very sad, but good haiku. I like the title too. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^ |
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