I love it! And I hate rap, it's so degrading in my opinion. And teens are pretty horrible to each other, I hate it. Well, awesome poem. It made me think, that we don't really see someone, not how they really are, we just see the outside. We try to keep some things buried(well I do). Sad. Keep up the awesome work.

Haha. This makes me want to burst out in evil laughter. If only they truly knew...But this was good. I really hate rap. And not just in that annoying "It's so stupid" way, even though it is, but it's also degrading and disgusting most of the time. *sigh* It does have a good beat though.

Great poem. It was awesome.

xD LOVE IT!

Loved it.

My favorite parts were the last three lines and "today's song is tomorrow's sin."

Very well written. Nice job.

-- Essa --

Kids can be so awful to each other, and in general... I like how you describe him then her then yourself. I love the ending. Great job.