Wonderful expressions! 'to tell the world I died for love' I like the line 'paper heart beats no more'. Although it's sorrowful, it has a sense of peace in it, which makes this piece beautiful. Nice work.

oh my god the first stanza.

this is really beautiful.

different then what I normally read. You write amazing by taking such a simple thing. Nice work

This poem uses a lot of beautiful images. I love the peaceful mood you have, especially the part about dancing as the rain falls through you. Short but sweet.

I love the imagery, especially of the dove. nicely done.

Sweet, but doves stand for faith/religiousness.