*stunned silence*

Amazing. Pure and simple. I feel that incredibly ridiculous feeling one gets after reading something... new/exciting/memorable/awesome.

Thanks.

AH! What's going on?!?!?! I'm loving this!

I am falling utterly in love with this story.

Well done, again.

Romance has never been my genre, let alone the Vampire esque romances. However, this is just as well written as Banalworld.

I congratulate you on your fine writing once again, and I hope to be reading more of it.

-Sophocles

i thought it was a reli nice ending, apart from the whole edison dying thing, didnt much like that lol, but it was necessary for the ending! really liked it...

ergh! it was both their faukts! fiorel's for taking advantage of his being a man...and chale's...for being a man! damn them all, lol.

good writing

I don't like Fiona. I think she's been unrightfully mean to Joss so far. Maybe it's because she knows Chale and Takeo like her and she's jealous of the attention Joss is getting.

Good chapter.

Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

hey! this is good...but weird lol- i'm not complaining though, it's way more entertaining reading this than it is reading half the other excuses for good writing on this site!

i really like your characters but i don't get takeo, i mean one minute he's playing the protective older brother thing and the next he's an evil jerk... maybe it's just me i don't know...

anyways, great writing, i'll read more!

Interesting chapter.

I think Takeo is worried that Chale is competition so he is trying to wear Chale's self-confidence down.

~Twilight Starr~

Interesting chapter.

Looking forward to more. :)

~Twilight Starr~

It's so sweet that Chale cares about him. ^^

Good chapter.

~Twilight Starr~

Poor Joss. Takeo is a very unusual character in the sick, twisted mind sense of the word, of course. I would be freaked out too if I was Joss. I wonder if she'll like him after this.

Great job on description. I really couldn't find anything to fault.

~Twilight Starr~

I have declared Fiorel a spoiled daddy's girl/brat.

Chale doesn't seem to be having much luck among the lovebirds--Eddie and Fiorel and Joss and Takeo. I feel sorry for him.

Anyway, good chapter.

~Twilight Starr~

I would be upset to if I wasn't included in some like that.

Good chapter.

~Twilight Starr~

Yeah, they are all screwed up, but nobody's perfect.

Great chapter. It's the best one so far.

~Twilight Starr~