This was a great start to a story. I think. You got the whole glowy thing introduced and stuff...I want to read more, that's my point.

I really like how you write. It's interesting and just quirky enough to be entertaining. It kinda reminds me of how the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is written... Well anyways. Good luck and hope you update soon. I'll be keeping an eye on this one. :)

Hah, Nathaniel's so oblivious. I love it. :)

i like this story so far. i really want to see what all is going to happen, so i hope you update soon :)

I'm curious about what actually happened and why he seems so easily angered. it's interesting!

this is cute. I wonder why Nate's glowing. Please update so I can find out. pretty pleease?

interesting~ can't wait for an update.

Pretty cool story so far. Like the title and am curious to find out why he's glowing. I like different relationship with the brother Zach and his 2 significant others. Tricky seems like a pretty funny character too, but Nathaniel needs to relax and stop being so ** off. Looking forward to more!

I-lost-some-of-my-keys,-sorry-for-the-dashes!-cool-chapter.

yes, make sure you get your sleep, if you don't sleep you die, and if you die, who will update this story? omg, I can't believe I just wrote that. I think I've finally lost it. Oh well, I love the story, I wish I had his skin...