what comes to mind when i read this is a girl who is realizing that her guy isn't what she thought he was and she's finally realized the strength to be her own person. i like it =)

I liked it!

Rowan.

I really like this..I've thought like this before. You've put it beautifully into words. Well done.

I'm glad for you if it meant something profound in your life, but I found it very unoriginal and cliched.

Just a suggestion: try describing more. How does the tear run down your face? How does it hurt?

Nice try, keep it up!

~Julia.