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| diffident 2007-09-17 ch 1,  | abuseThis was so beautifully & artistically contrived, it's difficult for me to articulate. Reading it was slow, but slow in a sad sort of dark blue calm. I don't know if I'm making sense. What I'm really trying to say is that I like this a lot. marie |
| Ashelin 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseI really loved the first four lines. Though this was a little sad, I still liked it a lot. Good job. |