Reviews for 4th of August - FictionPress.com

lordelfy 2007-10-20 ch 1,	abuse(random question...are you in the military?) This is a well written poem that really shows the strength of the person who was raped. I like how at the end them saying that they were assaulted but wont ever let themselves be the victim.
CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2007-09-25 ch 1,	abuseI really like the last stanza. It says a lot. There are a few spelling errors, but in all you conveyed the emotion really well. And true you say, if so, I can tell you why it was you (in my view of things): you are strong, you can handle it--you lived; so a younger, more innocent person wouldn't fall victim; so no one had to die. I can't explain all that I mean (a flaw in my writing) but I hope you get the message. I trust God (whether you do or not, I don't know). It was meant to be you for a reason--for a lesson, to save someone else's life, whatever the reason may be. God bless you. Keep writing. Constance (Rachel)
A Dreamer in Disguise 2007-09-18 ch 1,	abuseoh absolutely beautiful. i can feel the hurt, the deepening pain and despair. it brought tears to my eyes. if this is a personal experience i am so so sorry, that is just awful.