Wow. Short, but it says a lot. I really liked this. Great write.

Cassandra

I think I grasped everything you were trying to voice in this poem. I've been trying to let go of something myself and this was about as much a close comparison as I could find in a poem. This was amazingly written, I like that form of writing myself actually, though I've never really captured it well ^^' This poem is very delicate and beautiful on it's own. Great work

What a lovely poem. I really enjoyed your use of formatting and space. The bold darkness, the spaced capital letters of rainbows and butterflies. Very nicely put.