so true, so true. ah, the complexity of life.
nice job.

FYI- this is the chick whose poem you reviewed. Thanks for that.
Review- I like the way you worded the poem (no pun intended)and I like the format. The only thing I think you might want to try out is try to simplify your poem into an actual haiku format of 5-7-5. If you can do that, I think you'd have fireworks. The poem as it stands is really good, though. I liked it.

Hmm... So I don't know if I agree with the message you trying to get across, but I like the form in which you present it.

Ah-- I love this!! It's so very... writerish. Power to the pen! Kudos. ~CD

hm, deciding whether or not i like it.
it makes a lot of sense,
&& i do like the eel && meaning =3
hehe, good job