omg you better make another chapter soon...

im going to die waiting for it...

~smurf~

UPDATE SON!

GASP! THATS HORRIBLE! DID SHE SET HIM UP!? OMG! LIKE DID SHE TELL TEH POLICE TO COME?! OMFG! UPDATE SOON!

I won't hurt you, I just hope no one hurts me because I helped you plan all this! lol, although it was all your genius! =P Ha Ha suckers! I know what's gonna happen! sorry bout that. lol, Great chapter! Update soon! =D

What. Who took Anna? I'm so confused, Jake didnt take her, he was just talking to her, this makes no sense, otherwise I liked it.
JM

Good chapter again. Please hurry and write the rest! I bet that other guy was doesn't like Jake kidnapped Anna. Poor Anna.

you MUST must must update soon!great chapter!

oh my god! so good update soon!!

Did you just HAVE to do that, huh? Ever think about your dear faithful readers?! GR!! THIS IS JUST TOO EXTREME.
If you dont update soon I'll have to...to...to...EAT YOUR FREASHLY BAKED COOKIES! Yeah, thats right!
Lol, just kidding, but seriously, update soon. I love your story. This is some good stuff you got here.

I think there is an error in the first "Third Person" POV
You mixed up Ryan and Roger's name about halfway through that passage or something to that effect.

Anyway good story, keep up the good work.

Uhm...since u said it was up to us...(reviewers) i forgot to mention...jake and emma HAS to end up together...has to.

i freakin' love this story.

Oh no! they're gonna kidnap anna! I wonder how I know this? hm? lol, Great chapter! Andrew got what was comin to him! POW! right in the kisser... well more like right in the nose, but you get what I'm saying. I think you should finish royal pains ans THEN re-edit it if you want. I really don't know why you would have to but if you want feel free.
I can't wait to see what happens. Oh, and Larry is an idiot! what in is right mind would make him think that Emma would want to be comforted by him! EW! even his name sounds gross! lol, update soon!

Great Chapter! Please, Please, please update soon!

O wow!! lots of drama!! love it!! update soon!