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| RedWheeler 2007-09-18 ch 1,  | abuseNice to see another song by you, and I realize I have a few things to review of yours... but I haven't really had the time to sit down and read without distractions. I blame school. Regardless, I'm reviewing now! I have two favourite parts of the song; first: "Does it, make a difference?! Does it, change a god damn thing!? Can you, try and forgive this?! Do you, know this is everything? Everything to me, Go!" and my other favourite part was: "I make so many damn mistakes, My hectic world needs some brakes, But a smile is all it takes, I'm in love with you!" Anyway, great job! I'm an idiot so I thought the title was 'Tired', so I didn't understand how it exactly fit. Then I realized... oh it's 'Tried'. XD |