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Lise Alexandria
2007-11-18
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abuseHuh... that's a good question; why DOESN'T Fictionpress have a "death" category.

Whe, death. It's my favorite category. Very nicely written, probably around 24 words.

... haha, 24... I once read a summary of the show 24 in 24 words. Something about a terrorist going "AH" and then dying because Jack Bauer shot him.

Ah, good times, good times...
Butterfly Masquerade
2007-11-16
ch 1,
abuseShort and... well, sweet isn't really the right word, but I'm sure you understand what I'm getting at. And yeah, "death" would be a useful category to have. Want to petition for it?
AnimeAngelRiku
2007-10-22
ch 1,
abuseI know, there should be. Anywho, great poem!
OctoberSkies
2007-10-13
ch 1,
abuse:'(, its so SAD!! GR! lol thanks for your review Poof is updated now if you wanna read more. oi this is too sad for me teehee
George Harrison's Lover
2007-10-13
ch 1,
abuseRockstar rackstar rockstar...shame shame! Thinking about suicide again, you little emo you! You're so cute when you're emo. By the way, this is your best friend, Sidonie! Cut Terrell a lock of your hair...he'll love it!
Lana Mira Beth
2007-09-19
ch 1,
abuseCool. Death is always a fun topic. The brevity adds a nice element to the poem, and the imagery is quite nice. Good job.:) Thanks for the review. (I'd review something longer of yours, but I have to go to bed soon.:)
ProcrastinationLUVSme
2007-09-19
ch 1,
abuseNicely done! I was thinking the same thing about the catagory thingy. I was wondering why they didnt have one for depressing though but, close enough!
Sendo1920
2007-09-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was good, a little short though, but what am I talking about? I wrote a 4 line poem. lol. Nicely done.
TheNarglesWillEatYou
2007-09-18
ch 1,
abuseangel, that is a really awesome poem! keeping in mind that you did write it in like, 5 min, that is still a kick ass poem! i loved it. considering I WROTE IT, it's a really kick ass poem!
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