I think that this is my favorite of yours. But I still haven't read all of them yet. But I'm positive that all are magnificent.

wow. the last verse pretty much did it for me.. not to mention the Earth metaphor.. I really like your writing style, keep it up :)

This is a great poem. Not many people can describe a very dramatic event such as this without sounding melodramatic but you pulled it off very well. The earth taking baby steps in the direction of fall was a very innovative idea.

Wow, this really made me think. At first I didn't like the phrase "a flame of midnight sun" but I reread it a few times and I think it clicked-the sun is shining at midnight, just not on us. Maybe? Midnight is a frame of reference. The entire poem made me think, really. Few poems these days do. This is excellent, really. Very good job.

marie

Wow, sad.

But beautiful.

Really I loved it and the descriptions.

A new favorite.