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| elisefey 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseIt was simple, but in the way that a good fable is supposed to be. I really enjoyed it and the themes were lovely. |
| emizulu 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI thought that was a lovely fable, and I enjoyed the fact that the blind princess was the only one who could really see. Well done! |
| Tate Soyker 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I love fables. Nicely written. Keep up the good work. |
| robertrehcra 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseNice for such a short story. I am guessing you had the idea and thought it would make a good story but surprisingly you wrote it down smoothly. And finished it quickly. That never works for me. In the first paragraph you wrote " most most" Keep writing Keep Reviewing |