 Tytherpol 2007-11-01 . chapter 1this was really awesome. a clever idea.
i love the crazy (hypnotic) fomatting with the parenthesis/italics/bold. it's unique. |
 fairytale failure 2007-09-30 . chapter 1The format here is awesome. Especially with fictionpress being so difficult to work with, I am amazed at how you did this. I love the 'me?' at the very end, and the way it is out of the T. |
 EmilyAlice10 2007-09-19 . chapter 1Very good! I really like this one! I love how you did the "T"! I actually had an idea to do a poem like this, but i may not put it up...
anyway!! along w/ the art i love the poem to! I love how you related it to a childrens show, cause it really works!!
great job!! Keep writing!! |
 Ashelin 2007-09-18 . chapter 1Got the sad, angsty thing going on here. Those poor little children, they won't know what hit them. (i sure didn't). Anyway, good job. |
 Which Mistake am I 2007-09-18 . chapter 1lol i like this!! i really love how you made the the poem in the shape of a T! and i know how much u slaved over it and i'm very proud of you for!♥ |
 DiaRose 2007-09-18 . chapter 1I like this style. It's very unique. Refreshing.
Love,
~Dia |
 a silenced revolution 2007-09-18 . chapter 1I love the whole style of this; the ranty sound is perfect for the message conveyed. Really great. Adding to favourites. |