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| Tytherpol 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abusethis was really awesome. a clever idea. i love the crazy (hypnotic) fomatting with the parenthesis/italics/bold. it's unique. |
| fairytale failure 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThe format here is awesome. Especially with fictionpress being so difficult to work with, I am amazed at how you did this. I love the 'me?' at the very end, and the way it is out of the T. |
| EmilyAlice10 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseVery good! I really like this one! I love how you did the "T"! I actually had an idea to do a poem like this, but i may not put it up... anyway!! along w/ the art i love the poem to! I love how you related it to a childrens show, cause it really works!! great job!! Keep writing!! |
| Ashelin 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseGot the sad, angsty thing going on here. Those poor little children, they won't know what hit them. (i sure didn't). Anyway, good job. |
| Which Mistake am I 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuselol i like this!! i really love how you made the the poem in the shape of a T! and i know how much u slaved over it and i'm very proud of you for!♥ |
| DiaRose 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI like this style. It's very unique. Refreshing. Love, ~Dia |
| a silenced revolution 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI love the whole style of this; the ranty sound is perfect for the message conveyed. Really great. Adding to favourites. |