this was really awesome. a clever idea.
i love the crazy (hypnotic) fomatting with the parenthesis/italics/bold. it's unique.

The format here is awesome. Especially with fictionpress being so difficult to work with, I am amazed at how you did this. I love the 'me?' at the very end, and the way it is out of the T.

Very good! I really like this one! I love how you did the "T"! I actually had an idea to do a poem like this, but i may not put it up...

anyway!! along w/ the art i love the poem to! I love how you related it to a childrens show, cause it really works!!

great job!! Keep writing!!

Got the sad, angsty thing going on here. Those poor little children, they won't know what hit them. (i sure didn't). Anyway, good job.

lol i like this!! i really love how you made the the poem in the shape of a T! and i know how much u slaved over it and i'm very proud of you for!♥

I like this style. It's very unique. Refreshing.

Love,
~Dia

I love the whole style of this; the ranty sound is perfect for the message conveyed. Really great. Adding to favourites.