Loved the first chapter but hun, there is no second chapter :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is so cool, I've never had my heart beating the way it was while reading. Keep it up!

Wow... that was... disgusting, yes, but still wonderful. A truly magnificent piece of writing.
Kasaku.
*Flare*

Wow this was so well written! Sure it was gorey but hell! It kicked ass! Sorry I don't have any ideas for your next chapter but I still think you should continue!

Where's the second chapter? Oh well. The first one was scary! lol But very well written D Please continue!

wow! that was really good and i cant wait to see what happens keep up the good work!

forever demented

Raven

hey my perky little sister

i hope you are enjoying school i like your story this chapter was good but the first one was way better i dont really get into the wolf talking and but i enjoyed it anyways

Just as good as the first.

Veeeery interesting. I like bloody horror scenes anyway, but this is something else! I (not to get too freaky-deaky) think that Artemis, ancient Goddess of the Hunt should've been hiding Nancy, because Artemis wants her to become the new Huntress and take the nightmare creatures down. Just a thought. Definately keep it going.

i liked it i think princess but i dont know i was kinda scared but then again i am sure i am the toni girl so thanks for killing me

love ya

Hee, I like this. Alot. Keep on going.

Oh my is right! Wow! And I thought I wrote descriptively gory battle scenes (scratch that, I KNOW I do, it horrifies my parents _) but you took it to a whole knew, very interesting level! So is this little hick down gonna be terrorized by supernatural baddies, or what? *bookmarks this story*

its an interesting story and at first i was lulled into a sense of this is starting to suck and then bam it started ta get good and stuff good job

victor vivacious