this is really great. have you thought about publishing it in a magazine?

I like ending a lot... the whole piece is great.. I like the part about finding life... powerful piece

Deep, thick, like sinking into the depths of the universe. I really liked the ending. Great job.

This piece is absolutely intoxicating. You give the title such justice. Beautiful. And thanks for the review.

Different. And i Like it. Great work

Kristie Marie

Wonderfully written.