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| Chidori Nadare 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThe last line sounds so romantic. Yes, music overwhelms but still so gentle. Very meaningful and almost spiritual in 17 syllables. Great job! -C.N |
| ohthevoices 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI like how everyone always tries to define music in as many words as possible, and you just summed it up in 17 syllables. Loved it! |
| Chameleon81 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I like this. |