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| AK the Twilight 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseIt may seem particularly random at time, but the words are well thought-out and the conflict setup is well put together. It's open to interpretation, and although "The Dish" isn't fully explained, this was very, very well-written. Keep up the excellent work. |
| simpleplan13 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abusethe everyone lies and cheats thing makes me think of the TV show House... I like the stanza I am, the contradiction a lot... great piece |
| FunkyFlower17 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abusepretty cool actually. i like the continuous flow of it and the question at the end. nice :] take care! |
| shinco 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseCool, I like this! You're right, everyone has or does cheat and lie sometimes. That's the bad part. But yeah, you got a good thing goin' for ya, you don't like that stuff, so you don't do it. Awesome! That's what I love to hear! ^_~ Nice one, Shazaam! GO SHAZAAM! |