I like that the author tries to negotiate with greed but it won't leave. Nice touch! I really liked the poem. The title fits it well.

I really liked this. It was really straight forward and the way you wrote it made it seems like the green-eyed monster is some common thing you would see just standing on a street corner. I loved that aspect of the poem. I enjoyed it very much.

Oh, I also really like the (maybe's). They really added to the rythm of the poem.

Altogether, awesome. :D

-serpent-dragon-

This is a very good poem, I like your diction.

I don't know the imagery is nice, and... funny? it's just sweet by the way.

nice work

It's funny and not too heavy, yet has some depth as well. Nice rhythm, and the rhymes don't feel strained. Good work.

lol! this was hilarious!

good work.