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| Freedom Lasts Forever 2008 2007-10-27 ch 4,  | abuseWow. Another wonderful chapter. Some spelling mistakes, but no ones perfect. Really exciting, I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen. Keep up the good work. Loved it!! ~FLF2007~ |
| Estelin 2007-10-06 ch 3, | abusethis story is great. keep up the good work and writing. i love the characters eli and sky water. |
| Freedom Lasts Forever 2008 2007-10-04 ch 3, | abuseLove the ending of this chapter. Keep updating, this is great. Hope to read more. Bombs! OH :) ~FLF2007~ |
| Freedom Lasts Forever 2008 2007-10-04 ch 2, | abuseReally good chapter. Love the description of Taladonya and the unicorns. Some mistakes, but that's usual. I do them all the time. Again, really good story, keep it up and i'll keep reviewing! ~FLF2007~ |
| Freedom Lasts Forever 2008 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseReally good first chapter. I love her name. Sky Water! Sounds peaceful. There are some mistakes but otherwise, it's great. Look forward to reading more. Hurry and update. Lol ~FLF2007~ |