Reviews for Queen of Convenience

Reviews For: Queen of Convenience

Fractured Illusion 2008-03-24 ch 3,	abuseAnd I return ^^ And holy! Such a dramatic chapter! I was really pulled into it. Especially the description of the heat of the coffee giving pain to her first and then the cuts. Very realistic. Only thing I didn't get was why her parents were so mean to her, not letting her attend the funeral or come home. I wish it had been made clear a bit, or something. It felt a bit unrealistic, which detracted from the overall experience. Second: I find it strange she would notice so late she was in someone else's clothes. She only puked once. This means she wasnt mentally preoccupied with something ALL the time. Very gripping chapter though. Her wanting to die but not having the guts to kill herslef when she was on the road was another nicely described event ^^ Keep at it! -Frac
Fractured Illusion 2008-03-09 ch 2,	abuseAww ^^; I am liking these two put together. But poor Bobby. Her parents were cruel :P I like how your character sometimes says one thing but knows another, such as when she said her parents and friends were worried about her when she knew they weren't. I don't know, it just seems real. You have talking heads, though. That's when you have dialog without anything after. Not stating who is talking or something, you know? Anyhow, that isn't good, but I wasn't confused who was saying what at least. Hurray, she and bobby are now good friends :D They are amusing together, so I like this progress. - Frac
Fractured Illusion 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseHello, saw you on the forums and decided to check this story out. Glad I did! It is written in a rather simplistic manner, and I like it. Many authors who write simplistic make it feel empty and unsatisfying, but this chapter did not feel like that. It painted a good picture, gave good background info and... I dunno... I just liked it. I am slow in the head, so I am sorry, but my review sucks and I can't give more concrit :/ Keep it up! - Frac
Sylvia Woolf 2007-10-14 ch 8,	abuseI like it, of course. And i want more! I'm insatiable. I wasn't aware that the real life "Lonnie" blew his nose into his shirt...ew... I miss you. Isn't that silly? But reading your stories, I sometimes feel like I've got a better idea of what's going on in your head than when I'm sitting right next to you. And it's impossible not to love you when I read your writing. I can't explain it.
neon rainbow 2007-10-05 ch 6,	abuseI totally thought I'd reviewed the last chapter, but apparently no. Stupid computer. Anyway, I love this story; the characters are interesting and there's a good plot going. Update soon!
Sylvia Woolf 2007-10-04 ch 6,	abuseWHERE"S THE NEW STUFF?! I love it. I adore it. And if you don't upload the 2 new chapters you told me you've written, I will hunt you down. Even if that only means walking down the hall.
neon rainbow 2007-09-21 ch 3,	abuseGreat story so far. I quite like your writing style. I can't wait to see where this goes (:
snowzinger5 2007-09-21 ch 3,	abuseAll I can say is..damn...that was..intense
snowzinger5 2007-09-20 ch 2,	abuseOnce again another great chapter. This story is going places.
snowzinger5 2007-09-20 ch 1,	abuseVery nicely written I must say. You captured the mood very well. And if you dont mind would you review one of my stories?

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