Reviews for Look at the Butterflies

slash.obsessed.fangirl-42 2008-04-28 ch 1,	abuseaw, that was so sad! it was amazing, though! i could totally feel his pain. now i won't look at butterflies in the same way, though. you're right, they should have a category for death. -sigh- --kyra
Crying-Without-Tears 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abuseaw this is sad
AnimeAngelRiku 2007-10-22 ch 1,	abuseThis was so sad yet so beautiful! I swear I wanted to cry. -sniff-
TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-10-12 ch 1,	abusethat was such a good story. i love it. i really think that u deserve more reviews though.
ProcrastinationLUVSme 2007-09-20 ch 1,	abuseOh, its so heartbreaking! I loved it though! tear not bad for a one shot! Oh! and my story is finally posted! Review please
Tranquil Thorns 2007-09-19 ch 1,	abuseNicely told! Very heartbreaking. ={ I didn't notice many errors. However, in "or sad hat he couldn’t see them too" 'hat' should be that. And in 'she cries out strickenly', I don't know if 'strickenly' is used correctly. =X It just seemed a bit odd to me. Anywho, those were just minor little things. =D A suggestion, too. When you cut to his memory, I don't think you need to actually title it as 'Eric’s Memory'. You can perhaps use italics instead?