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| glimpses from an ivory towe... 2008-03-23 ch 1,  | abuse"means every flower wilts at birth" Amazing. This poem reminds me strangely of Buddhism and its idea of "no-self". I loved the way you tied in the ever-approaching collapse of the universe with the impermanence of philosophy and man's most trusted ideas. Thanks for reviewing "Don't Listen"...I really appreciated it. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. It flows well. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| OctoberSkies 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseo i liked this very much thanks for posting |
| Michael l'oeil fol 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseit is very true...we are dying from the moment we are born...yet though the ideas fall...you have captured and recreated them in your work?...stared imminent destruction in the face and created...very yeatsian of you...very smooth you still mature and i still admire Michael |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abusei don't really get it, but i'm slow sometimes. it was really well written if that helps! |
| Wrath of Naillil 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abusefor some reason it made picture a building falling down...have u ever read uglies? i kinda saw the rusty ruins. anyway, i liked it. good job! |