 RedWheeler 2007-09-20 . chapter 1When I was talking to my brother about your songs a while ago, he said a song was just a poem with music to it. So as long as you have a tune in mind... it's a song.
Anyways, I realized the ending line sort of tied into another one of your songs. So I thought that was pretty cool; makes the whole thing sort of seem optimistic.
My favourite lines were: "I hate to comprehend what you will never understand! I hate to finally understand myself" and "I hate to pretend to be what I don't understand. I hate to pretend to trust myself." They really broke into the song, appearing as honest reflections of yourself.
Another great job! |