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Reviews For: To Overcome Thyself

RedWheeler
2007-09-20
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abuseWhen I was talking to my brother about your songs a while ago, he said a song was just a poem with music to it. So as long as you have a tune in mind... it's a song.

Anyways, I realized the ending line sort of tied into another one of your songs. So I thought that was pretty cool; makes the whole thing sort of seem optimistic.

My favourite lines were: "I hate to comprehend what you will never understand! I hate to finally understand myself" and "I hate to pretend to be what I don't understand. I hate to pretend to trust myself." They really broke into the song, appearing as honest reflections of yourself.

Another great job!
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